Mr.Bloodriver
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 | Assunto: Fanfic - "God"  Dom maio 05, 2013 9:03 pm | |
| Bom, eu gosto de escrever no meu tempo livre e comecei a escrever uma história original quando estava aborrecido.
O nome da fanfic é "God", eu tive muito tempo a pensar num nome para dar mas não arranjava nada até esta quarta-feira, ao ver o novo episódio de Sobrenatural o personagem "Metatron" fez uma referencia que eu gostei bastante, nas palavra dele as pessoas ao escreverem histórias são como Deuses desse micro-universo, eu achei engraçado e foi por isso que escolhi este nome para a história.
Devo avisar que eu escrevo as minhas histórias em Inglês, é um mau hábito meu, no entanto se me for requisitado no futuro, traduzirei para português, alem disso, não levem os nomes dos personagens ou terras a sério, eu criei os nomes dos personagens através de objectos ou palavras que tinha à minha frente com a excepção dos protagonistas, Kurokaze vem do Japonês e quer dizer Vento Negro, Shirohi também vem do Japonês e significa Fogo Branco, o continente/mundo onde se passa a história chama-se imaK, que é um acrónimo de Kami, que por sua vez quer dizer Deus/Divindade em Japonês, o nome do continente é baseado no titulo da história.
E sem mais demoras o primeiro capitulo:
Episode 1 - Pilot:- Spoiler:
-A long time ago, in a very distant land called imaK there lived a young boy and girl. The land of imaK was very special, there were enormous mountains and valleys that extended for miles, green plains filled with fresh air and deep mysterious forests, scorching hot deserts and beaches with pleasant breases. All sorts of creatures roamed imaK, ogres, goblins, fairies, dragons, and many others, and this was the land inhabited by Kurokaze Embar, and Shirohi Dall. Kurokaze and Shirohi would grow up to become the most powerful sorcerer and gracious witch respectively and legends on their own right, and this is the story of their growth.
-In a spring morning, in a village called Loso, a young boy around his 11 or 12 with silvery hair slept in his room, the room was small and empty aside from a wooden bed on which laid the boy, a table with a book on top of it, a chair and a black cloak hanging near the end of the bed, the simple division had only one window from which a beam of sunlight entered the room causing the boy to moan as his sleep was disturbed. The boy suddenly got up remembering he had something to do today, he dressed up quickly, grabbed the book on the table which read on the cover “The Basis of Sorcery” left home running –I’m going to be late – thought the boy, he kept running until reaching a tall tower with a plate which said “Loso Academy of Sorcery and Witchcraft”. You see, Loso was a village known for its proficiency on raising many great Sorcerers and Witches, it just so happens to be Kurokaze’s first day. Kurokaze reached the front door and knocked, the door in return said in a reprehensive tone – You’re late boy! What is your name?
-My name is Kurokaze Embar! – declared Kurokaze in a proud manner. – Everyone is waiting, go on – Said the door. Kurokaze entered the tower and was mesmerized, he was in a hallway that seemed to go on forever, alongside the hallway there were countless doors and stairways. Starting to get a bit desperate, Kurokaze thought – Where am I supposed to go? – and as if the tower was expecting this though it reshaped in front of Kurokaze leaving him in front of a door with the inscription “Class 1 –B”. Kurokaze knocked on the door and hear someone from the inside say – Come in – the door led to a classroom various tables and students were sitting and listening to a teacher, a very skinny and tall man with a brushed and very clean hair, the man’s face was very bony, he wore wired glasses a white shirt with a tie and a black cloak, when he saw Kurokaze he said – So, Mr. Slacker here thinks he can arrive at class at any time he wants, isn’t that right?
- No, I’m sorry sir – apologized Kurokaze. – I don’t want to hear any excuses I’ll let you know that I do not allow any slackers on my class – said the teacher.
- Now now, don’t be so rough on the boy, Yaru. – the one who muttered this words was a very old man, he had a very long white beard and was dressed in a light blue cloak and a pointy hat with the same color , the old man seemed affable, at least more that the other man named Yaru. – My name is Enspirion Dall I am the headmaster of this academy, and this is Professor Yaru Wisto, after the reunion is finished I and Professor Wisto would like to have a talk to you, to fill you in on what you didn’t hear in the reunion – added the headmaster after seeing Kurokaze’s worried expression – also, be sure to arrive on time tomorrow because we will be testing how comfortable you are with Magic.
- Yes, sir. – replied Kurokaze
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| | Assunto: Re: Fanfic - "God" Ter Jul 23, 2013 5:48 am | |
| Posso só fazer uma questãozinha rápida rapidinha?
Porque tens o capítulo em Spoiler? '-' (versão mobile e spoilers não se dão bem,sorry '-'). E eu costumo gostar de ler fics '-' | |
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Mr.Bloodriver
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| | Assunto: Re: Fanfic - "God" Ter Jul 23, 2013 7:05 pm | |
| O capitulo está em spoiler para não encher o post com muito texto, só isso, also eu já não toco neste fic à um bom bocado, talvez depois volte para a acabar, mas não devo escrever mais durante um bocado. | |
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